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Or, "A visit from Kwanzaa Tookie" (For Little Whip....Merry Christmas)
Published on December 16, 2005 By Rightwinger In Humor
~~**WARNING**~~

Racial references ahead; if you are offended by bad language and what some might consider "racist" terms, please DO NOT read further.


'Twas the night b’fo Kwanzaa, an’ all t’ru da ‘hood,
All da ‘bangers wuz bangin’ all da ho’s dat they could.
Not a one used a rubber, even though they might;
After all, bitch git herself pregnant, Welfare make it right.

We’s kickin’ in m’crib, all stoned up to da gills,
On a bad-ass combo of some cheap wine and some pills.
My bitch, she leaned her ass forward, and reached in her pack;
She pulled out a Kwanzaa surprise---some heroin and crack!

All night long, we’s smokin’ an’ shootin’,
laughin’ and gigglin’ at nothin’, but we’s hootin’!
Then, out in the street, I heard such a big fuss;
Dogs barkin’ an’ growlin’, makin’ a loud ruckus!

I staggered to da window, jus’ as slow as molass’
Tore down the damn curtains as I fell on my ass.
Pulled m’seff up to da window, to have a li’l peek;
Man, o’man, but I sure hadda take a leak!

Then what did my blurry, blood-shot eyes be scopin’ out?
Why, a pimpin’, gold ’76 Caddy; it was dope, no doubt!
That gold paint was a-shinin’, crushed velvet inside;
Da bass wuz a-thumpin’ "Gansta’s Paradise"; thas’ one sweeeeet ride!

From da spinners all a-spinnin’ to da solid-gold trim;
I knew then an' there, it jus’ hadda be him!
8 big dogs there wuz, a-pullin’ that car in;
Rottweillers an’ Pit Bulls, all slobberin’ an’ snarlin’!

The driver, he sneered as he called them out loud,
"Yo, Hennesey, yo, Courvosier, yo Colt .45 an’ Hurricane!"
"On Boone’s Farm, on Arbor Mist, on ripple an’ Cristal;
"Come on come on, gotsta slow da fuck down, y’all!"

He then jumped from his ride, all mean an’ angry-lookin’;
An’ quick as a flash, up my front steps he wuz a-bookin’!
The glint of a gun I saw in da light;
An AR, I could tell, he had held in his right!

A crash at my door as his boot kicked it in;
It wa’n’t that hard…da wood’s really thin.
An’ then, there he stood, in da door with a leer;
It was him! Kwanzaa Tookie wuz here!

My bitch, she done screamed, as she seen his get-up;
His orange prison jumpsuit, his shackles an’ his cuffs.
He raised up his gat, and with a cold smile,
Got his ass ready to fire on us a while.

His finger was callused, and it tightened on the trigger;
The gun it went off, an’ I yelled "Yo, Niggah!"
But as he fired, I saw, I had nothing to fear;
Where the bullets should be hittin’, no holes did appear!

Instead there were, all scatterin’ all aroun’;
Presents an’ presents, all fallin’ to da groun’!
Sean John’s an’ FUBUs, hip-hop CDs an’ gold chains!
Lotsa guns an’ lotsa drugs, an’ even more of the same!

There were .9 mm’s an’ shotguns an’ AK’s by the score!
A Tech-9, a .44, an’ ammo galore!
Crack pipes there were too, an’ the stuff used to fill’em,
He told us to smoke some, but to sell it, if we’s willin’!

Then he was gone, just as the smoke wuz a-clearin’;
An’ I heard’im outside, at his dogs he wuz swearin’!
He revved up the engine on that shiny, sweet Caddy;
An’ as he slammed it in gear he called to some Ho’s in the alley.

He laughed as they got in, and they laughed right with him;
Been twenny-fi’ long years since he’d got any trim.
I heard him shout out as he beat them Ho’s to stitches;
"Fuck you all! Happy Kwanzaa, you muthufuckin’ bitches!"

Comments
on Dec 20, 2005
Excellent effort


Why, thank you.
mind if i scroll it in the poetry chat room I currently haunt?


Not a'tall, not a'tall.

If so, how do you want it tagged, just "rightwinger?"


Uhhh...I don't care....I guess that's okay. Thanks!
on Dec 20, 2005
One more thing, LW....be sure to give me the link if/when it gets posted?
And I want to see your when you finish it.
on Dec 20, 2005
I bee offended by dis racist shit, mofo not enuff cuscing n shit, and de ho's bee not happy enuff to get some dis here dick.

funny stuff rightwinger.
on Dec 20, 2005
funny stuff rightwinger.


Yo, Thanks, Pops!...glad ya'll be likin' it. Peace out, Homie!
on Dec 21, 2005
Nice job! Very hilarious.
Too cool for words.
on Dec 21, 2005
Nice job! Very hilarious.
Too cool for words.
---singrdave

Thanks, SD....glad you liked it.
on Dec 21, 2005
I have a program that scrolls poetry line by line into that plane, to be used in poetry chat rooms, saving me the tiresome task of cutting and pasting each line.
---LW

Cool. Maybe I'll look you up there, though I don't really like chatrooms all that much, and what I'd do in a POETRY chatroom, I'm not sure.+LOL+
on Dec 21, 2005
At the risk of blatant self-congratulations, I have to admit that the part that I laughed the most about as I wrote this was where Tookie shoots up the apt.

Being a gangbanger who comes on Kwanzaa, instead of quietly coming down your chimney and leaving you presents out of a magic bag like Santa, Tookie kicks the door down and shoots the place up with his magic machine gun, the bullets turning into presents.

I don't know why, but that image is so ridiculous, it just makes me laugh.